Wednesday 8 August 2018

Angus... My Personality

Introduction to ME

 Hi. This week my class is doing tuhi mai tuhi atu with a classroom from greymouth in blaketown school and tuhi mai tuhi atu means "I write to you, you write to me." Our class and their class have made a slideshow about each and everyone of us in the class this is mine and hope you can a little more about me. Don't forget to comment feedback and feedforward.

Improving Blog Comments

Improving Blog Comments

This week koka Maria came into our class to teach us about Improving our blog comments We had to choose a blog comment we had made and look at how we could improve it. I chose my most recent comment to change. The highlighted words are showing the things I have changed from my original post.